Published November 4, 2009
There you are are all alone thinkin' of better days,
in the end you shall see,
that I'm not who you think I am,
no I'm not a lonely man,
and if you don't let me go I will leave you alone,
alone,
(all alone)
in the end you shall see,
life is not just one big dream,
and if there is one lesson to be learned its...
that I'm not who you think I am,
no I'm not a lonely man,
and if you don't let me go I will leave you alone,
alone.
(all alone)
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this is a song about a women who won't let go of a man who doesn't love her, i know i helped write it,
is that animosity? pain? maybe hiding a hurt overly exposed heart. either way, short but sweet. not bad at all. just shows only raw emotion not an actual skill. which i don't know if thats okay or not. ive only been here a few days now but i do like what you have. its not bad at all